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14th May 2011, 02:26 PM
Hey, I have a hero idea for DotA, what do you think of it? :)

Zah'el - Halfbreed Druid

History: Son of Esha'zur, a Night Elf Warden, and Taur Runetotem, a warrior of the Tauren, he is an halfbreed druid that possesses both Night Elves and Orc skills, and he will use it to defeat the Lich King, which caused so much death and pain to his father and mother's homeland. He can buff allies with powerful shields and his furious spirits help him in battle with uncontrolable rage, while he enchants his allies with furious orc totems and thorns his enemies to cause pain and agony. Zah'el shall be recognised as a valiant druid.

Strength-17 + 1.7
Agility-14 + 1.2

http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR3J-etnIonXubdyhq2QjWx3-HMLJJp00JGQ1YwtRrFIsuigsgsShield of Wisdom- Zah'el buffs an allied target. Who attacks the unit with the buff will have some of the damage and gets stunned. The effect lasts for 2 hits or 8 seconds. It returns all kinds of damage.

LVL1-55% damage returned and 0.5 second stun.
LVL2-80% damage returned and 0.75 second stun.
LVL3-105% damage returned and 1 second stun.
LVL4-130% damage returned and 1.25 second stun.

Cooldown: 24 seconds.
Mana Cost: 80/95/110/125

http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSTbnfF_UAhDrOV1XxReWyApJum7_0zA eE3P2bpT97MQdCHVm3iOQThorns-Buffs a target unit, who makes enemies that hit it have attack and movement speed slow. The buff lasts 12 seconds and the effect to who attacks it 3 seconds.

LVL1-Slows for 15AS and 10%MS.
LVL2-Slows for 25AS and 16%MS.
LVL3-Slows for 35AS and 22%MS.
LVL4-Slows for 45AS and 28%MS.

Cooldown: 22 seconds
Mana Cost: 90/110/130/150

http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQcMrIf_5d8F0MUqY1uv2TrzVWW1R6eJ mJc7WA3py64X0Ct6gquOrcish Totem-Zah'el enchants a totem with shamans’ magic and puts it on a hero. Any allied unit that is near the totem will be enraged by its spirits and will gain movement speed. Lasts 15 seconds.

LVL1-Gains 7% movement speed, 225 AoE.
LVL2-Gains 11% movement speed, 250 AoE.
LVL3-Gains 15% movement speed, 275 AoE.
LVL4-Gains 19% movement speed, 300 AoE.

Cooldown: 35
Mana Cost-120/130/140/150

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/10/icons_9895_disbtn.jpgEnraged Spirits (ULIMATE) -The spirits of Zah'el become enraged, stealing armor and attack speed from a target enemy's hero, and giving it to Zah'el.

LVL1-3 Armor and 9 AS. Lasts 10 seconds.
LVL2-6 Armor and 18 AS. Lasts 13 seconds.
LVL3-9 Armor and 27 AS. Lasts 16 seconds.

Cooldown: 20

By: Akhetaton :tiphat:

Obs.: His model is supposed to be like Druid of the Talon.

14th May 2011, 04:09 PM
Interesting one, thought it would more likely suit some Night Elf than Tauren.

14th May 2011, 04:34 PM
there is some epic english here, had a nice laugh, also the hero is overpowered

14th May 2011, 04:34 PM
LVL4-210% damage returned. -this is just too much, imagine this+bm, its like u hit him with lina ulty and take damage for next 5 games of dota )

LVL3-28%MS, 450 AoE. -if this is passive then its uber imba, imagine 5 heroes running around with 522 ms :D

LVL4-Slows for 70%AS and 40%MS. - 70% of total as?

14th May 2011, 04:45 PM
LVL4-210% damage returned. -this is just too much, imagine this+bm, its like u hit him with lina ulty and take damage for next 5 games of dota )

LVL3-28%MS, 450 AoE. -if this is passive then its uber imba, imagine 5 heroes running around with 522 ms :D

LVL4-Slows for 70%AS and 40%MS. - 70% of total as?

@shield: mby i can change it to next attack only, as it was on the beginning.
@ulti: well I can lower it, but remember that's a Lvl3 ultimate...
@slow: well 70% is not that much for 4 secs, look at enchantress, if I well remember it's perma -80% AS...

@fika: then teach me, tell where're the errors and I shall fix it.

14th May 2011, 04:48 PM
no its not 80% of the total as, its just 80% of bonus and normal ms, for example you have butter and assault, thats like 55+30=85% (yes +30 more from agi bonus but whatever keep it 85) bonus as, you hit encha and you still have that +5% as and your normal one, but if it was -80% total you'd have only 20% of your normal one + 20% of that butter and assault shit which is imba

w/e xD

14th May 2011, 06:37 PM
1st skill: u cant say "last for 2 hits" cuz there are many skills in dota that do dmg over time and also dont forget about creeps that make this skill useless
2nd skill: quite overpowered skill its like enchantress first skill but castable in any hero and with additional slow which can save it from ganks.
3rd skill:simply a skill that can destroy tower+raxes in 3 seconds and can win a teamfight by itself
4th skill: ok lets do the math average hero with treads/phase= 370 ms +20% by this skill =444ms + jango = ms close to haste not imba at all
General idea of hero : 4 buff hero is mega crap

14th May 2011, 09:47 PM
I'd say we better ask IceFrog to add void demon again.

14th May 2011, 11:02 PM
hero isnt rly imaginative.....hes like a walking buff....check playdota.com(not fucking eu) forums, there r some ppl that made their own hero's.....here r 2 interesting heros....

there r videos and everything u need to know about them.....just use imagination and someone who is rly familiar with rolls and that kind of crap....talk with ss players and igic_legend

16th May 2011, 02:43 PM
Yes i agree with deadly on this one.I mean the best person to ask about that kind of stuff is igic_legend aka The Slayer.

5th September 2011, 02:12 AM
edited :)

5th September 2011, 03:25 PM
ulty sux and doesnt have any sinergy whatsoever with other spells and with his role

thorns is still too imba

orcish totem is kinda stupid... I mean srsly

int hero with no slow, stun, nuke, disable - only 3 buff spells is to inert and would be too bad laner = never picked

all in all I'll be honest, don't like it at all

5th September 2011, 04:14 PM
that's ok, the hero is far from perfection and that's what I'm working for, since I made it from raw and just now bein' editing it, so all critics are welcome unless insults. Ty